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The Moment by ~BonJerome:iconBonJerome:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


The galaxy clusters align
Slowing their super-sized promenade
In that silent instant
Nebulae bait their breath
Suns stutter-step
Planets and moons hold
Comets look on
     from the arc of their orbit
Meteors meet atmosphere, hesitate
Pressures high and low linger
     in cirrus pauses
As the jet stream stalls
Causing leaves to cease their cluttered flutter
Blades of grass reverse their twitch
Each particle in this grand scheme
Keenly aware
When you and I lock eyes
Our universes overlapping
In a Moment, shared...
©2007-2009 ~BonJerome
:iconbonjerome:

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Each moment is a gift, worthy of attention.

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~OpheliasNightmare May 28, 2007, 5:21:11 PM
It's even better in person. :)
:iconbonjerome:
~BonJerome May 28, 2007, 9:15:29 PM
Hehe thanks. :) You should know, you were there. Thanks for your help.
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~bblk May 29, 2007, 5:51:52 PM
That's nicely written, and true. :clap: Great job!
:iconisraaeel:
~israaeel Jun 2, 2007, 7:33:45 PM
Very nice

--
"Beauty is the oracle that speaks to us all. "
- Luis Barragán
:iconbonjerome:
~BonJerome Jun 2, 2007, 11:21:43 PM
Thanks very much. :) I've enjoyed your gallery a lot since I started haunting this corner of cyberspace again.
:iconisraaeel:
~israaeel Jun 3, 2007, 5:28:24 AM
Well, thanks m8
Glad to hear that
Cheers

--
"Beauty is the oracle that speaks to us all. "
- Luis Barragán
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~TheWhimsicalSchwartz Jun 22, 2007, 11:02:40 AM
That's amazing. What a word-smith! :)
:iconbonjerome:
~BonJerome Jun 23, 2007, 7:04:46 PM
Thank you! :) I keep looking for more stuff from you...
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